It is a place poem. It is about my room and how messy it is. I got my ideas from how much I like this house and room out of the others that I’ve lived in. I like to revise this piece and make it longer because it only made it to the minimum length which was 15 lines. I think that I can make it to the maximum which is 30 lines.
My Room
I have a secret place
Where posters cover the wall
Clutter on the floor
You can’t see the ugly orange carpet
Books over flow the shelves
Biggest room in the house
My Jonas brother’s sanctuary
Trip over things every time you enter
Finally time to clean
Picking things up
Finding things I haven’t seen in a year
Done
Too clean for me
Mess it up again
Home
My room a place of Joy!
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